Really enjoyed the Game so far and I can see this has a lot of potential.
Only have 2 questions:
1. Will you be implementing a relationship bar so we can see more clearly how our choices effect them?
2. Can you please make a discord server? It would help a lot to build up a community for the game but also be able to get the word out so more people can find it!
I'm sorry for making this a technical comment, because there are many things in the game that I want to praise, and I hope to do so in the future. But I feel you really need to check and improve the way you are programming/coding the game.
Now, for full disclosure, the laptop I own is quite old. However, this is the first AVN I've played on it that has crashed, and multiple times at that. At first it happened during the Miss Rose scene, and I thought it may have been a combination of having music, animation, and sound effects going on at once, however then - the next day for me, so the laptop had time to "rest" and wasn't overheated or anything - it started crashing on the conversation at the Cafe scene. This to me, who knows nothing of programming, makes me think it may be a thing with the way you are making the music loop (like, the first time the track plays, it's fine, but it may start "accumulatinh" loops that make the program collapse, if that makes sense). I'm not one to obsess over graphics, but I have played many games with better ones that do not crash, and even the animations they play run smoothly, so I can only conclude it's an issue with the program. I tend to make a massive amount of save files, and I'm on page 50 for this game, however that has never given me issues on other renpy games, so if that's the issue there may be too many unnecessary information coded into each save? Of course, the game having a virus within its files is also a possibility. I would recommend you check it thoroughly and try to make it kinder on the processing to stop it crashing.
Unfortunately, I'm not a master programmer either. I'm learning as I go while developing this game, and this is the first time I've heard about something like this. I will check the code in the places you mentioned and if I find something I'll improve it in 0.2. However, I can't guarantee anything, sorry.
Thanks for letting me know!
Edit: I found a problem with animations using too much memory. This will be fixed in the next update. Thank you once again.
Im praying for mating press and full nelson stuff. Also, what kind of stuff can we expect fetish wise? Please tell me we can get some bdsm, mind break, brat/bitch taming, and cock worship. Lf to whatever you got planned.
Sorry to disappoint you, but none of these things are planned atm. I am not saying it will never happen in the game at any form, but these "more extreme" things most likely won't be in the sex scenes with main girls.
Hope you are not going to abandon it fam that's my only take here and also some improvements in the future I'm seeing a potential here so definitely waiting for it :D
I don't have a list of planned fetishes. If you want something specific let me know what it is. Then I'll be able to tell you if there's a chance it will be in the game in the future.
These fetishes will definitely not be part of the romance with the main girls. They may appear as part of the story but mc is not into them, so he won't be part of them.
So far the game looks great, the design the backgrounds too and side characters is also promising like chad. And the cliffhanger left me crave for more hopefully the game update wont be long. But im not saying you need to rush it,
And do you have plan adding gallery next update ?
And the design on Vanessa and Rose is just absolultely good, hope these two will get a scene next update too ❤
Well. Still haven't tried, but wanted to point one thing (that you can ignore, you are the boss here 'creator of the game' ) , don't make every chara with big bazoongas, honestly, i like small, i'm sure there are many like me, so dont shoo away potential supporters, good luck, waiting for more updates before trying
Hilarious, the conversation is quite quirky and captivating. A few small error with the arms of characters from time to time, like Katie's arm in the 3rd to last preview from the above. Another thing is that there is no Quick Menu in Android version , even though I have enabled it. But overall, is it a perfect first release? No. But is it great one for a new dev? Heck yeah. Looking forward to your game in the future
I'm not planning to do anything like that at the moment, but it's not something I'm ruling out completely. I'll be thinking more about it, when I create bios for characters, as I might include some counting system in them.
Imo, I think you should do that in the future but if it's too much of a hassle, you can just keep making a Walkthrough file but release for the Public Version too maybe?
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Hi There
Really enjoyed the Game so far and I can see this has a lot of potential.
Only have 2 questions:
1. Will you be implementing a relationship bar so we can see more clearly how our choices effect them?
2. Can you please make a discord server? It would help a lot to build up a community for the game but also be able to get the word out so more people can find it!
Hey, I'm really glad to hear that!
1. I plan to implement a notification when you get a point with the girls.
2. Yes, I'll make a discord server. I was planning to open it with 0.2 release but maybe I'll do it sooner.
I'm sorry for making this a technical comment, because there are many things in the game that I want to praise, and I hope to do so in the future. But I feel you really need to check and improve the way you are programming/coding the game.
Now, for full disclosure, the laptop I own is quite old. However, this is the first AVN I've played on it that has crashed, and multiple times at that. At first it happened during the Miss Rose scene, and I thought it may have been a combination of having music, animation, and sound effects going on at once, however then - the next day for me, so the laptop had time to "rest" and wasn't overheated or anything - it started crashing on the conversation at the Cafe scene. This to me, who knows nothing of programming, makes me think it may be a thing with the way you are making the music loop (like, the first time the track plays, it's fine, but it may start "accumulatinh" loops that make the program collapse, if that makes sense). I'm not one to obsess over graphics, but I have played many games with better ones that do not crash, and even the animations they play run smoothly, so I can only conclude it's an issue with the program. I tend to make a massive amount of save files, and I'm on page 50 for this game, however that has never given me issues on other renpy games, so if that's the issue there may be too many unnecessary information coded into each save? Of course, the game having a virus within its files is also a possibility. I would recommend you check it thoroughly and try to make it kinder on the processing to stop it crashing.
Well, that's interesting.
Unfortunately, I'm not a master programmer either. I'm learning as I go while developing this game, and this is the first time I've heard about something like this. I will check the code in the places you mentioned and if I find something I'll improve it in 0.2. However, I can't guarantee anything, sorry.
Thanks for letting me know!
Edit: I found a problem with animations using too much memory. This will be fixed in the next update. Thank you once again.
Im praying for mating press and full nelson stuff. Also, what kind of stuff can we expect fetish wise? Please tell me we can get some bdsm, mind break, brat/bitch taming, and cock worship. Lf to whatever you got planned.
Sorry to disappoint you, but none of these things are planned atm. I am not saying it will never happen in the game at any form, but these "more extreme" things most likely won't be in the sex scenes with main girls.
Hope you are not going to abandon it fam that's my only take here and also some improvements in the future I'm seeing a potential here so definitely waiting for it :D
Definitely not planning to! Thanks for playing
What fetishes can we expect?
I don't have a list of planned fetishes. If you want something specific let me know what it is. Then I'll be able to tell you if there's a chance it will be in the game in the future.
Any chance for any of these?
Pregnancy
Shortstack
Femdom
Monster girls (orcs, slime girls, lamia, ect.)
Size diffrence
No
No
Rather not
Possible
Rather not
These fetishes will definitely not be part of the romance with the main girls. They may appear as part of the story but mc is not into them, so he won't be part of them.
Im looking forward to seeing where this story and game go.
So far the game looks great, the design the backgrounds too and side characters is also promising like chad. And the cliffhanger left me crave for more hopefully the game update wont be long. But im not saying you need to rush it,
And do you have plan adding gallery next update ?
And the design on Vanessa and Rose is just absolultely good, hope these two will get a scene next update too ❤
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
I have plans to add a gallery, but right now I'm not sure if I'll be able to do it in 0.2.
However, in 0.3 it will be there for sure.
Well. Still haven't tried, but wanted to point one thing (that you can ignore, you are the boss here 'creator of the game' ) , don't make every chara with big bazoongas, honestly, i like small, i'm sure there are many like me, so dont shoo away potential supporters, good luck, waiting for more updates before trying
Variety is the spice of life 👍
Hilarious, the conversation is quite quirky and captivating. A few small error with the arms of characters from time to time, like Katie's arm in the 3rd to last preview from the above. Another thing is that there is no Quick Menu in Android version , even though I have enabled it. But overall, is it a perfect first release? No. But is it great one for a new dev? Heck yeah. Looking forward to your game in the future
Thanks for letting me know, I'll look into android version and try to fix it. Glad you like it and I hope you'll like future versions even more!
EDIT:
Quick menu fixed. Sorry for that!
no problem mate. I like your game, so I hope at least I can help with my opinion. Good luck to u in the future
Btw, in the future, will there be a counting system or something to notice us if we make a right choices to romance a character?
I'm not planning to do anything like that at the moment, but it's not something I'm ruling out completely. I'll be thinking more about it, when I create bios for characters, as I might include some counting system in them.
Imo, I think you should do that in the future but if it's too much of a hassle, you can just keep making a Walkthrough file but release for the Public Version too maybe?
Will there be impreg?
Not planned